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On Boiling a Pot of Soup for Thanksgiving

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Perhaps you have once seen the Cheshire Cat? –
A smiling child that pops out half past nine.
An echoing click may give sight to a bat,
But sound the clock, "tick-tock," and take what's mine:
A thought of love condensed into a word
(Awaking in a chair you used to sit),
A flowering spring brings out the lonely bird,
(Though winter's heartaches freeze its modest mitt).
And now the season brings impending shoes,
A Cheshire Cat will smear its face with jam.
I drop asphodel roots into the stew,
I wonder if you'd taste it through the ham.
So long as you are waiting time will fly
Since neither life nor death dare break our tie.
When my teacher assigned this sonnet assignment I was sick and my friend told me I had to use these assigned ending words ("cat, nine, bat, etc."). It was pretty hard to make a coherent poem, and even now, I'm not sure people would get it...^^;

I actually like this better than my other one though, and it was easier to write, for some reason. Perhaps it's because I can't change the ending words so no second thoughts? Haha, but anyways, this is about an old woman reflecting on her deceased husband as she cooks Thanksgiving dinner. (Asphodel is a flower related to death and the afterlife.) Uh...not sure if that came across. ^^;
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thesquareroot's avatar
there meter is a little off in a few lines, but i overall i quite liked it